Monday, April 8, 2013

Goldilocks and the 3 bears persuasive writing

I believe that Goldilocks was bad.

Firstly, she broke into the bears house. She had no right to go in and touch things. What would you feel if someone came into your house?

Secondly, she used things without asking and broke things.
She did not own it and she can’t afford to pay for the things that she broke in the house.

Thirdly, she left the when the bears came home. Goldilocks was very rude and she did not say sorry to the bears. She did not ask forgiveness from the bears.

Goldilocks should go to jail and she did not ask permission. She was not allowed to enter the house and she messed up the their things.

1 comment:

Fuatino said...

Great first effort with your Persuasive Writing Kilisitina. Keep it up!

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